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[♪]　How does TV affect people　?　【已修改】

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　　TV is a necessarity in our life .No one can live without it .It
is either a good thing or a bad thing .It depends on different
people .


　　TV can help us learn a lot of things .For instance ,we can
learn many languages from TV .If you want to learn English ,you can
watch Enlish movie as well as learning other languages .TV also can
increase our knowledge such as Discovery ,TVBS and so
on .Moreover ,TV can help people know what happened outside of our
country .


　　On the other hand ,there are also many disavantages on watching
TV .Watching too much TV is bad for us .Children always like to
watch TV and watch too much .They can’t control themselves .It may
hurt their eyes .If they choose the bad programs ,it may turn their mind bad .Seriously ,the children may be violence .Therefore ,it is important for us to choose correct programs because TV affects people a lot .



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　　TV is a necessity in our life. Most of people can live without them. It is either a good thing or a bad thing.

　　TV can help us learn a lot of things. For instance, we can listen to many languages from many TV programs. If we want to learn English, you can watch English movies. Many TV programs also can increase our knowledge such as Discovery, TVBS and so on. Moreover, TV can help people know what happened outside of our country.

　　On the other hand, there are also many disadvantages on watching TV. Watching too much TV is bad for us. Children often like to watch TV and watch too much. Most of them can’t control themselves. It may hurt their eyes. If they choose bad programs, the children who watch them may be violence. Therefore, it is important for us to choose good programs because TV affects people a lot.





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watch Enlish movie as well as learning other languages .TV also can
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bad .Seriously ,the children may be violence .Therefore ,it is important for us to
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choose correct programs because TV affects people a lot .
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