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How does TV affect people? 阿茂超人啦

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TV is a bad thing but it is also a good thing . People can increase their knowledge by waching some science program . It is convinence for people to know what have happen around the world and people can catch on the fashion by the mass media . Moreover , people can watch the latest sport’s information to know the result of Wang . It is convinence , isn’t it?
On the other hand , people are able to watch adult movie and smoe violence program . They always affect people becominng dreamy . It is meaning that peolple also do sex dream . Some studies say whatching to much TV can make a people becoming stupid and poor concentration . Watching too much TV makes people have near sight . So TV is bad for peole who have addiction on it . Therefore , TV can be both bad and good . It depends on how you use it . The TV set is controled by you!

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TV is a bad thing but it is also a good thing . People can increase their knowledge by *watching some science *programs . It is *convinent for people to know what have *happened around the world and people can catch on the fashion by the mass media . Moreover , people can watch the latest sport’s information to know the *results of Wang . It is *convinent , isn’t it?
On the other hand , people are able to watch adult *movie and smoe violence *programs . They always affect people *becoming dreamy . It is meaning that peolple also do sex dream . Some studies say *watching *too much TV can make people *become stupid and poor *concentration . Watching too much TV makes people have near sight . So TV is bad for peole who have addiction on it . Therefore , TV can be both bad and good . It depends on how you use it . The TV set is controled by you!


*concentration →我不知道哪裡錯 哦哦! 不知道噢!

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TV is a bad thing but it is also a good thing . People can increase their knowledge by *waching some science *program . It is *convinence for people to know what have *happen around the world and people can catch on the fashion by the mass media . Moreover , people can watch the latest sport’s information to know the *result of Wang . It is *convinence , isn’t it?
On the other hand , people are able to watch adult *movie and smoe violence *program . They always affect people *becominng dreamy . It is meaning that peolple also do sex dream . Some studies say *whatching *to much TV can make *a people *becoming stupid and poor *concentration . Watching too much TV makes people have near sight . So TV is bad for peole who have addiction on it . Therefore , TV can be both bad and good . It depends on how you use it . The TV set is controled by you!

1.Use transitions correctly ,so your idea is clearly presented .

2.You should be more careful about your spelling .
2007-09-17 00:35:53
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be careful about your spelling
2007-09-18 10:43:05
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damn i understand
2007-09-18 20:36:07
否 是 (若未登入"個人新聞台帳號"則看不到回覆唷!)
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