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剛剛關「射手之箭」時誤砍了十幾集,我快死了⋯⋯正在詢問小天使怎麼辦,雖然有存檔,但留言和推薦無價啊啊啊啊啊⋯⋯

另外滿一個月,「月夕花朝」和「玉半彎」也關了,蘭花盈清、李怯葉暮雲,有緣再見啦!

接下來就是把「妳的姓氏」寫完,然後繼續創作我的墾丁二部曲,uni大說我原來的名字「愛你到此為止」不大好,那我就改成「時間的城,愛像大海一樣深」,來呼應我的墾丁首部曲「那年盛夏,一首清冷的歌」。我非常愛墾丁,所以應該不忍心給它悲劇啦!

 

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瀟雨
啊可惜了
2020-09-27 19:15:21
camille
啊,這篇就不好按讚。><
等等,uni還沒看故事,怎麼意見這麼多?
2020-09-27 19:28:15
版主回應
沒有啦~~~
我自己也覺得[愛你到此為止]這個取名蠻隨便的~~~
雖然本人走白話路線~~~
但也不可以這麼隨便啦~~~
2020-09-27 19:30:35
楊風
你真是多產作家

早安,順心愉快
2020-09-28 08:14:00
版主回應
我的文字就是以量取勝

謝謝大師蒞臨
2020-09-28 08:47:04
月泱
希望文章和留言一切,能挽救的回+1,
祝 教師節快樂^^
2020-09-28 09:05:41
版主回應
謝謝妳~~~
2020-09-28 10:11:59
教師節快樂!
2020-09-28 09:41:49
版主回應
謝謝妳~~~
2020-09-28 10:12:15
路痕
虐心
2020-09-28 10:53:02
版主回應
是誅心~~~
2020-09-28 10:53:37
冷大,教師節快樂!
今天妳最大

併祝中秋快樂
柚子節快樂,烤肉節快樂,詩人節快樂,月餅節快樂,蛋黃酥節快樂
(哈哈,都被我說完了)
2020-09-28 12:56:05
版主回應
謝謝你的祝福啊~~~
2020-09-28 13:22:48
uni2019
不會吧,你由哪開始砍了?後面精彩的都砍了?你是抓蟬抓過頭了嗎?我有其中的一篇,可惜是外文的。
找回到沒?教師節快樂。
2020-09-28 20:52:06
版主回應
96-109全砍了⋯⋯
文章本身我有存檔⋯⋯
麻煩的是留言和推薦沒有了⋯⋯
外文的那篇你可以寄給我嗎?我蠻想看看的。
我的信箱:tzaito@yahoo.com.tw
2020-09-28 21:39:32
uni2019
https://youtu.be/nq9pbsVecFs

李斯說:媽,這次應該我出場的比例可以考慮多一分鐘了吧~~~送您。
2020-09-28 21:18:46
版主回應
這卡片真漂亮,謝謝你啦!
2020-09-28 21:38:08
陳跡
小天使說文章救得回來
但留言推薦救不回來
那就不用小天使了
我自己文章有存檔
自己補齊了~~~
唉~~~
大家按刪除時要小心啊~~~
2020-10-03 23:20:22
uni2019
Hunter wiped away the charcoals smear on Connie’s face, softly and delicately.

Snow started to decent in Central Park, on Connie’s and Hunter’s hair and shoulders. “Looks like it is snowing…” Connie looked up at the sky and said. “Hunter, today I have earned an extra £9, would you like to join me to have a cup of coffee, please?”
“My dearest Connie!” Hunter could not hold back his emotions anymore, to him, Connie’s every word had called on him to love her even more. He tightly embraced Connie and continued, “ You are here, you are really here in front of my eyes!” With all his sealed up feelings toward her, Hunter broke down and whispered.
“Hunter Hahn, I am here, I don’t know how I made it here, but all I know is, this is the most I wanted to do…” Connie stood on her toes and placed her chin on Hunter’s shoulder. “I don’t care you have a new lover or not here in London... I don’t care how long we could be together this time, I just wanted to be with you…”

“How long could we be together? Nonsense! You think I will let you slip away from me again? From this moment to eternity, you are mine and mine only!” Hunter’s voice was cracking because he was so happy to see Connie again.

“Hunter, you are my prince from the day we met, The prince I have loved with all my life, I wished dearly I could be yours for the rest of my life.” Connie whispered next to Hunter’s beautiful handsome face.

Snow continued to fall more densely, but to Connie, it felt extremely warm in the arms of Hunter Hahn, her one and only one prince.
2020-10-08 10:33:54
uni2019
A pair of well shined black boots with a trace of melting snow appeared before Connie’s eyes.”Sir, would you like to have a portrait, cost is only £3.” Connie has no intention to turn down any profitable possibilities even it was getting dark in the late afternoon. She stood up and about to make her sales pitch. Then Connie took a sharp sudden gasp when her eyes met with the one who was standing in front of her, Hunter!

Traveled an endless miles from Taiwan to London, she finally seeing Hunter reappeared befor her, Hunter Hahn, the one who she love so deeply.

With an awkward hesitation, both had fallen speechless; to finally see each other once again in this place thousands of miles from home, even though they both had so much to say to each other, all of a sudden they just stood there and looked at each other with surprise.
Good gracious! You have came, you have really found your way here at London to be with me! Hunter could feel his heart beating with excitement. “Are you...heading back home?” Connie was the one who first broke the silence with steamy breaths amidst the cold.
“...I am not heading back home. Hunter passionately looking at Connie and said. “Either do I…” Connie replied with a full smile.

Exactly like the exchanges they made twelve years ago’s winter in that play ground. It started as”...Yuck! You are not so clean…”
2020-10-08 10:35:06
版主回應
太謝謝你了~~~
以後有英文的問題再請教你啦~~~
翻得很美~~~
這樣翻很辛苦吧???
2020-10-08 11:30:53
uni2019
The last one should be pt.1 of your story I translated.
2020-10-08 10:36:41
uni2019
約定   

還記得當天旅館的門牌
還留住笑著離開的神態
當天整個城市 那樣輕快
沿路一起走半哩長街
還記得街燈照出一臉黃
還燃亮那份微溫的便當
剪影的你輪廓 太好看
凝住眼淚才敢細看
忘掉天地 彷彿也想不起自己
仍未忘相約看漫天黃葉遠飛
就算會與你分離 淒絕的戲
要決心忘記 我便記不起
明日天地 只恐怕認不出自己
仍未忘跟你約定假如沒有死
就算你壯闊胸膛 不敵天氣
兩鬢斑白 都可認得你
還記得當天吉他的和弦
還明白每段旋律的伏線
當天街角流過你聲線
沿路旅程如歌褪變
忘掉天地 彷彿也想不起自己…
2020-10-08 10:37:32
版主回應
王菲的天籟美聲~~~
林夕的神詞~~~
回不去的經典~~~
2020-10-08 11:32:24
uni2019
不會。你還忘了一句:
王菲的天籟美聲~~~
林夕的神詞~~~
回不去的經典~~~
版主神乎其神的筆鋒~~~
似是那沙漠裡駝鈴~~~
冬季裡的雪蓮
令讀者流連忘返呢

說好一句,李斯食言了~
2020-10-08 11:43:59
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